Great poem ,well written , good choice of words and the meaning was loud and clear , ,could really relate to this piece,,,,,
All his dreams were shattered like a glass
but he found some good in those pieces.

He thanked God that he picked him
willing not to repeat any of his sins.

great job keep it up, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Nice poem.
" This day is to end as I see the moon
giving way to a better day soon. "
Those lines I like the most.
I enjoyed reading it.
Well done.
Take care

I love this poem!!!!! It made me think no matter what there is good in anything. (Hence he learnt to fly without his wings) keep it up 5/5

Great poem,very very inspiring.you always find the right words well done.it was easily read and interesting,keep it up x5/5

It was a great and poem, but I think I saw spelling error. You might wanna check it out, its only one word in the 3rd stanza, I think. But anyways, I liked the poem and my friend found it to be interesting and inspiring, I felt the same. I'm going to give you.. 5/5 ^_^

(BTW, thanks for the comment and I'm glad that you're the first one to notice the errors, I appreciate it very much)

Hi Rohan,really an inspiring poem.keep it up .

This is a great poem. It can be interpreted in different ways. A very positive and uplifting piece, full of hope and optimism. Excellent.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Its awesome.. it made me feel better after a really bad day..
5/5

''He learnt to fly when he lost his wings
yeah that is why he still sings.''

Those lines are so pretty and beautifully written...

My other favourite part was:
''This day is to end as I see the moon
giving way to a better day soon.''

I thought they too, were beautiful and inspiring and by the time I had finished reading I was left with a big smile on my face...good flow throughout, beautiful imagery and elegantly written...perfect.

Great poem, very positive and inspirational. It is very creative and excellently written.
My favorite lines are:
-You also take your sorrows with you
and use the pains to be just, better and true.

All his dreams were shattered like a glass
but he found some good in those pieces.-
Very deep piece.
Keep up, 5/5 from me