Heart broken

by cat   Jul 7, 2007


Blood droplets fall from the heart of a woman,

as she try to pick up the peaces of a broken love,

they all said wasn't meant to be,

as he walks out the door,

she brakes down and cry,

because who were they to say whats meant to be?!,

for she thought they would be together for eternity

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well i haven't posted anything in a long time so her is a poem i wrought about a brake up with a guy i dated and really like and how it hurt when we broke up. so i hope u like it and plz comment back on it and tell me what u think

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  • 15 years ago

    by azii

    I read this out loud and even though normally i don't get into this type of poems, this one just.. trapped me lol! it's very touching, i really like it. nd i can relate. like u said about my poem i guess we're going through the same eh? :P
    the words are really good, there were just some typos to correct:
    as she try (tried/tries)to pick up the peaces(pieces) of a broken love,
    they all said (it) wasn't meant to be,
    good one though. oh and my fav part was the line saying who were they to say it wasnt meant to be. just great :)
    best wishes, take care
    -azi

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