The Power.

by Lizzy   Jul 8, 2007


We all have the power
To make our lives great.
We all have the power
To find our love, and fate.
We all have the power
To dance and to sing.
We all have the power
Do do anything.

^Wow. That was my first poem EVER.
It's bad, i know. =]

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  • 18 years ago

    by Anea

    I like the meaning of the poem and especially the rymhming :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Hatori

    Ms. Lizzy,
    This is a great poem, Lizzy :D. I agree with the person that commented before, that it's been a while since an optimistic poem has crossed my path. The topic you chose seems to work well with your style of writing.
    The flow was very good as well. Short, but full of meaning.
    Keep it up, 5/5

    With all due respect,
    Hatori
    The Illusionist and seahorse

    P.S. If you get a chance, could you read one of my poems? Thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I love that Lizzy.
    I hadn't read an optimistic poem in ages :)
    Thank You For Sharing This!

    Marjan

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