Hey, i like it. I love to writing hikuo's (i cant spell) and that. It's fun.

You're really good at writing this type of poetry! keep it up!

This honestly was quite the perfect haiku to tell you the truth. The description was vivd and painted a beautiful picture in my mind. What more can I say then well done on writing such an amazing piece of poetry. ~mel

I wouldn't have necissarly said "Flames" at the beginning, but this is a really beautiful Haiku. Simple, but the wordings perfect.
Nicely done.

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