I like this one, it was so tranquil and peaceful, reminded me of dropping off to sleep, which is very fitting for the effect you're giving off =)
Excellent form
5/5
*Gem*

Just like *Gem* said, "I like this one" :) I like the title of the poem :) it really goes well with the poem :)

Again another brilliant piece of work you have here. I truely enjoyed reading this. You put so much depth into such short pieces. Well penned and great description. 5/5~mel

Eh, not too bad. I'm sorry to say I didn't like the ending at all; the first two lines were beautiful, though. However, the ending is slightly more important. Sorry.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5