I think it's good. I'll give it a four. I think you can do better so that is the only reason I gave you a four. I'm really sorry I can't be more specific. I usually am but that's usually with the ones that need help. And since this one isn't bad there isn't much to critisize. Sorry. I'll go check out the other ones in hope of more to say.

It was good but something in it threw me off a bit not sure what it was but anyways good poem 5/5

This is a very beautiful series of poems, I've read the other two, and wow! Amazing work!
It holds alot of emotion, a great quality is a poet, you have it mastered!
5/5!!!
~Blood Angel

If you want my full honesty, then I will say that I don't think this is the best poem you've ever done.
The rhyming is a it shaky because you've rhymed things that don't go together or are the same thing and it doesn't quite flow. Although the actual words are deep and meaningful, the structure of the poem is a bit amateur.
I feel that if you want to bring this poem to it's full potential you should hit the rhymes harder with more solid sounds.
For example you rhymed enter with her. It doesn't quite go together, maybe you could've changed the wording a bit to make it go something like this:
You told me to get away from you
For you wanted someone else to enter.
If you had told me that before,
I would have made way for her splendor.

Something a bit more solid. See?
This is constructive criticism, don't take anything personally. It's to build your poems to their full extent.

3/5

First of all sorry about last comment i wasnt done with it but the first two lines i loved they rhymed and flowed fantasticly well this whole poem did! the ending was great def 5/5 again

Wow. already i am intrigued and i have to go on and read the other 2. it was a great way to start of this piece. 5/5

This poem was very good, the flow was flawless and I really enjoyed it. Yet I have a feeling that you can bring your emotions with a harder impact, making the whole thing 100 times better. But still, this poem was great, good job.

Beautiful poem.
Very emotional and touching.
Great flow and word choice.
Loved reading it.
Take care

This reminds me of my own relationship :\ I refuse to go back out with him again (we've dated three time already) we both end up hurt .. last time I cried during my whole french final.. Then he told me he just wanted to be friends, I wanted that. I was too hurt to go through that again. Then next day he's drunk and tells me he loves me.. And now he always trying to get back with me. Saying he needs me. .. oh well sorry to bore you with my drama :P

Wonderful write! You put a lot of description and thought into you did an amazing job. The only parts where I thought you were a little weak were when you rhymed with the same word. Try to widen your vocabulary.. but other than that.. the flow was great. (besides the weak spot) The emotion was terrific. Very sad, filled with desire... Over all you did an excellent job.

This is my favorite part:

You made me feel special
You made my world real
And now you ignore me
Making my word surreal

You did a great job at rhyming. And I liked how you put surreal in there. Not many poets use that word ;)

Excellent Job

5/5

Read all three parts of this poem and my heart bleed! It reminded me of something I went through in my past. Very well put together!
~Shade127

Beautifully written. I love it. You have this talent when you're describing the emotions. Keep it up :)
5/5.

Wow this was a really good and emotional poem and i can really relate to this poem at the moment! I really like the way you used your words in this one! great Pen!5/5

Wow! Deep, man, very deep! 5/5

Heya
great poem
really touching
hope things get better with the other two
good job
thx for the comments

Keenan

Perfect rhyme, stazas ad nice flow. I lik the part
Craved for you, to be with you
And I believed you were true

Beautiful. *applause*

I love how you made your emotions seep through with each word.. definitely well penned!

great piece.^__^

Greatly written poem filled with sadness. You expressed emotions in a good way through the whole piece. I like the honesty and simplicity of this piece, created to describe very complex emotions.
Well done!
My favorite stanza is:

-You made me feel special
You made my world real
And now you ignore me
Making my word surreal-

Keep up!

Wow. That was so beautiful. And sad. I loved the flow of it and the emotion that radiated off of it. I love it! Keep up the good work ;)

Really sad poem. I've gone through this before n I really liked this poem. 5/5

Dude, love your ideas - just try to make it flow a little more!