A Friend in Need

by Ayanda Elena   Jul 9, 2007


She sits under the stars,
Praying to her Lord,
Her Savior.
(The one I don't believe in.)
Crying into her hands...
Crying the tears
That wreck my world.
I long to hold her and save her.
Save her like her God cannot.
I'll fix the heart that's broken...
I'll fix her.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Neme juste un jouet

    Simply put, this poem struck me with its depth in so few words. It is stunningly beatiful, and so heart felt it could make even a happy heart ache. Wonderfully done. Bon. -NeM- 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    This is short, but very good. it gets right to the point, but i think it should be in the friendship section. not a problem! still good.

    5/5

    Who are you???? I'm dying over here!
    Allanah