Tribute to you alone.

by Sad But True   Jul 9, 2007


Whenever life is throwing me a black twisted curve ball,
Whenever my heart cries and shouts out an earth shattering call,
Whenever my sorrows and pain is to much to bare,
I just close my eyes, think of you and know that you care.

Whenever my guilt is making my heart cry,
Whenever my tears is sucking my soul dry,
Whenever I feel I'm so alone I must die,
You are there to lift up, to help me get by.

You are the only one, who knows me inside out,
You are the only one, who helps me fight,
You are the only one, who deeply cares,
You are the one in my prayers.

I give tribute to you, you alone
I give you my heart and sole to the bone,
I give you my word, I will always be there
I love you without wax, please take care.

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  • 16 years ago

    by broken angel

    What a beautiful poem... the type of words every girl wants to hear. excellent work

  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    "I love you without *wax*, please take care." was a curious line to finish with. I assume it's a metaphoric?

    All in all, I enjoyed the rhythmic verse.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was beautifully written.
    Flow was good for the most part, but I thought there were times when it seemed a little shaky...try eliminating some of the fillers (I, you, and etc) to make it perfect, it usually helps alot.
    Apart from that however, this was very touching.

  • 16 years ago

    by sadeyes

    Great poem, you are wonderful expressing your feelings. I really loved the poem
    Your Friend
    Lisa Ann

  • 16 years ago

    by sadeyes

    Great poem, you are wonderful expressing your feelings. I really loved the poem
    Your Friend
    Lisa Ann

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