Comments : Kryptonite

  • 15 years ago

    by I - O - W - A

    Amazing poem, very emotinal

  • 15 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Awwww. there were a few little spots that needed simple tweaking, and there needs to be apostrophes and stuff. other than that, sweet and original poem. i liked this. 5/5.

    thanks for the comment.

  • 15 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Oh my gosh.
    :] That was so beautiful.
    The emotions were so strong, the flow was great, && overall, it was just SPECTACULAR. :]

    "But when its hard to breathe, Ill be the fresh air that keeps you on solid ground
    And just like the beauty in your eyes, you can trust me to always be around
    Any hour of the day, throw on my cape, and be with you through the night
    Just promise me you wont cry, for your tears have become my kryptonite"

    ^ Wow. I just adore those lines. You're a wonderful writer, keep it up. 5.5 :]

    - Steph <3

  • 15 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    It reminds me of two songs, superman and if your not the one

    really good!!
    amanda

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a super poem. It is very refreshing to read a bold love poem from the fantasy viewpoint of my chidhood hero.

  • 15 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful free verse penned you portrait here, so heartfelt write yet breathtaking! you've a gift that no many have.... "There is no stimulus like that which comes from knowing that others believe in you. There is no investment you can make which will pay you so well as your effort to scatter sunshine and good cheer where ever you are. As water is to a flower... So is praise to the heart of another." Beautiful done!

    Best wishes from west, Bert.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very unique. Great job on the imagery. Love the way you incorperated the Super Hero into your piece.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Wallace

    Lol, nice poem, I found it a little hysterical actually. Only thing I could say is just watch your syllable count, how much syllables in a line, try not to have too many long lines or else it gets tyring for the reader to read, and i think thats what happened in the middle, but good job though, keep it up.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 15 years ago

    by :. bri-bri .:

    Wow!!! that was great. very beautiful

  • 15 years ago

    by Lia Jnell

    This is an absolutely amazing poem sisco!!! definatly very emotional and i hope that you publish your works some time. you are an amazing writer... as i continually tell you, and your work is unbelievable!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by dora

    Omg this was soo good very well written! keep it up =D xx