Suicide of a teenage girl

by iloveyouandrew   Jul 10, 2007


A teenage girl
she was 13
and already she was sick of life
Her mom left her when she was 11
and Her dad is dying of lung cancer
she feels so alone

Alone in the world
without anyone to save her
She thinks of that one special boy
the one she loves alot

She trys to talk to him
about how she wants to die
and how she wants to drift on to heaven
and leave everyone behind. But he just says
"oh things will get better"
and he walked off to meet his girlfriend

So she goes home
and she sees her dad laying on the couch
he is coughing and hacking
and having trouble breathing

So she goes into her room
and starts to have a breakdown
She takes her one special friend
His name is The Razor

She puts the razor to her wrists
and carves "im sorry i just couldnt take it anymore"
and she starts to bleed and bleed
All of a sudden she sees a flash of black
and she lies in a puddle of blood

Her sister comes in
and finds her lying on the floor
she calls an ambulance
but its too late

On the news next week
The top headline is
"The suicide of a teenage girl"
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  • 15 years ago

    by Suicidal Love

    ^^intense^^ the other comments say it all, great emotion and an amazing impact - well done 5/5

    suicidal love xx

  • 15 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    Wow that was really good. It really had an impact on me because I have tried as well and your poem brought back what it felt like to be so close to death. Beautiful work.
    ~Stefanie

  • 16 years ago

    by HiDDEN TRUTH

    VERY qOOD! PLEASE READ AND COMMENT MiNE.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow, I like it! Great write, so sad but as eveyone else says, intense and well written

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    Sad. But I like it.