Shackled

by JiKaRiN   Jul 10, 2007


I can feel blood flowing out of my veins,
I can feel its never ending pains,
I feel exhausted, hopeless and restive,
Undeniably, I am shackled indeed!

Into a tumultuous land I've been,
Living with people who are fearless and mean,
Chained with my ill-dream of being free,
Shackled, that is truly me!

My arms and limbs chained firmly,
Insulting much of my dignity,
To obey is all I can do,
To be free is what I've wanted to!

My eyes were poor and my feet were swollen,
My hopes were dying and I keep falling,
Into a deep well of vengeance and anger,
Shackled, as I always were!

My ill movements, my weary thoughts,
My thin body, my shattered clothes,
My pitiful hymns,
My own shackled dreams...

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  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    5/5 Amazing write

  • 16 years ago

    by audrey harris

    Awesome poem, you write wonderfully. like your other, 5/5. write some more!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Superb! I found everything about it excellent, from the words down to the strong emotion; you write very well... Great job

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Wow. Take that off in the end:
    "Hi guys! Sorry if the poem isn't that good, I knew it.. But I would really appreciate if you would give comments.. Please.. Thanks a lot!!!.."
    Cuz you don't know what your saying. Great choice of words. Seriously.

    Your in my Favorites.

    Keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Ok this totally was good! It was very from the heart and that's what means the most in poetry. Not form or flow ( in my opinion anyways ). I think it was exellent! And thank you btw for the comment on my poem, I am SO sorry that you can relate to that. Just keep writing...it releases a lot of anger, trust me! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

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