Bill
What a passioate beautiful poem. Carefree days when nothing matters but each other. Not a care in the world.
Excellent job
Your friend Cindy

Amazing

Beautiful.
The words where filled with carefree passion, making for wild and free poem.
A very intensly beautiful read.
I loved it,
what talent you posess!
Elaine.

*If you could take the time, could you please check out my poem ` The Moon Temptress. I would really appreciate you feedback. Thanks.

Very passionate and interesting piece of writing. Nice imagination... Liked the flow too.

All I can say is WOW... where did that come from :o)

Bill, it has been a while since I last read your poetry, but I find it no less passionate than I did before. Your words have the power to stir a person's soul, and that makes them beautiful.

Deeply sensual but spiritual too. I've never come across a poem that managed to combine these two elements. Well written.

Did i missed this one... wow... hot & spicy