Wow, this was another amazing poem dear. full of emotion, great advices, nice words, and the best rhyme.
again a great success dear.

Wow! another masterpiece from you, David 5/5 i especially liked the first stanza! beautifully penned!

xD
~NinjaGirl~

I used to feel like that but now i have taken the right way and anyway when youhit bottom the only way is up.

XOXO Hannah XOXO

I loved it. grabbed me in from the beginning and kept me in till the end.

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Yay, a new poem.

This is very well written David. The flow and structure was great. 5/5

happy to read another great poem from you David.

Kalee

I like the emotion in this and how it is so heartfelt. I thought the flow was a bit rocky though, but I'm really picky with that when I read poetry so yeah it might just be me. Anyhow, other than that, I think you did a great job. Well done. =]

Tammie

Full of emotions is this poem.
Like the flow and rhyme.
A great piece of writing.
Well done.
Take care

It's beautiful, but it's also very sad for a boy your age, David.....

You show a lot of feeling here and express it so well! 5/5

This is a good poem, somehow I can see what your going through, but I'm not you so I'm not sure if this poem relates to me or not. Still, a very good poem. 5/5

This is gr8 ad sad poem..realy emotive:d
keep up the gr8 works:d
tk care
breex

Is strongly moved and somehow thinks it applies to me rather than you an awesome score of 5/5

Is strongly moved and somehow thinks it applies to me rather than you an awesome score of 5/5

This poem is cool i luv it its very emotional and really seems to draw u in when ur reading it great work

5/5

I really really relate to this poem, caught my interest immediately.