Comments : Living Memory

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this was another amazing poem dear. full of emotion, great advices, nice words, and the best rhyme.
    again a great success dear.

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Wow! another masterpiece from you, David 5/5 i especially liked the first stanza! beautifully penned!

    xD
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by CrazyCowLady

    I used to feel like that but now i have taken the right way and anyway when youhit bottom the only way is up.

    XOXO Hannah XOXO

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    I loved it. grabbed me in from the beginning and kept me in till the end.

    *^*crow*^*

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    Yay, a new poem.

    This is very well written David. The flow and structure was great. 5/5

    happy to read another great poem from you David.

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    I like the emotion in this and how it is so heartfelt. I thought the flow was a bit rocky though, but I'm really picky with that when I read poetry so yeah it might just be me. Anyhow, other than that, I think you did a great job. Well done. =]

    Tammie

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Full of emotions is this poem.
    Like the flow and rhyme.
    A great piece of writing.
    Well done.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    It's beautiful, but it's also very sad for a boy your age, David.....

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    You show a lot of feeling here and express it so well! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    This is a good poem, somehow I can see what your going through, but I'm not you so I'm not sure if this poem relates to me or not. Still, a very good poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    This is gr8 ad sad poem..realy emotive:d
    keep up the gr8 works:d
    tk care
    breex

  • Is strongly moved and somehow thinks it applies to me rather than you an awesome score of 5/5

  • Is strongly moved and somehow thinks it applies to me rather than you an awesome score of 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    This poem is cool i luv it its very emotional and really seems to draw u in when ur reading it great work

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by ForeverGoneInYourEyes

    I really really relate to this poem, caught my interest immediately.