If you could live your life once more

by Amy   Jul 11, 2007


If you could live your life once more,
Would you try to unlock the door,
And live your life differently,
To how you did the time before?

Would you try much harder to be,
Who you are in your fantasies,
And make your wildest dreams come true,
Of what you think you'd like to be?

Would you make somebody love you,
Is there something more you would do,
To make that somebody's heart leap,
And open up with love for you?

Is there a secret you would keep,
That you previously let leak,
And felt guilty forever more,
For letting that one secret seep?

If you could live your life once more,
Would you try to unlock the door,
And live your life differently,
To how you did the time before?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Megan

    That's really good! I love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by stefanie

    Amazing. i like this one so much. its something that i would write. great job. the flow was perfect, the idea was well thought out and very provoking. amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Krysten

    First off the answer is no b/c (well why id detaild in my poem different points of view). 2nd this is a beautiful thought provoking poem. and i loved it. it all went together great and just its a wondeful poem. keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    The mystery, the words, the feelings... I love it.You definately deserve a 5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Germanya

    Good