Sweet poem.
Great words and structure.

" I am ready for love,
all the joy and the pain.
plus all the time that it takes
so that i may stay in your good grace. "

Love this stanza especially.
Well done.
Take care

What can i say, am lost for words, i do not simply love what u write, but the way u write it is simply amazing...i could read you on and on without getting bored...keep it up dear and know that i just added u to my favourites and that means u are my first favorite...

Hey i really like your style on this its freestyle but i dunno i cant explain but its really good,

thanks for your comment on my work

p.s. you should join this poertry club im in i think youd enjoy the range of pieces in it :)

You have to be ready for love seen as how that poems is exactley what love is about, and you are right that you should becareful what you wish for!

I love your poem and hope allyour wishes come true 5/5

I like this one...its beautiful,...definitely5/5...
you are a very strong girl:), keep up the great work and the good thoughts,....your friend....*Melody*:)

Good poem....i really liked it...and if this is true..im glad you are ready for love..happy for you =]

I like the poem its real good
keep up the good work

Hey,
i really enoyed reading this poem. you did a great job. i especially liked this stanza:

because i am ready for love,
all of the joy and the pain that it may bring.
though I'm happy with this sweet melody that you sing.

^that was great for me. but overall the whole poem was very good. it flowed well..keep it up!

and thanks for the comment on my poem =]
--Viola
all the best!

A good poem, a little choppy. Maybe just needs some work. I guess maybe I just don't like it so much as I loved your other ones. Can't say why. Don't mean to say anything that might hurt, I'm just a bit blunt I guess.

"because i am ready for love..."

So true of how I feel right now. I want someone to love. I miss that. You really captured that feeling well. I am blown away by the more of your poems that I read! 5/5 :)

~Kat~

It feels like you were very much in love when you wrote this poem! I loved it!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Iv been ready for love for to long now:)
just cant wait to faal again
nice

Brilliant poem :)
with a great opening into the poem!

"I am ready for love,
all the joy and the pain."

followed by a truely memorable ending :)

"because i am ready for love.."

5/5 again :)!