You're an odd one; only slightly proud? I'd be all high and mighty if I were you. Lmfao. But, I'm not...

So, it was quite the acrostic.
They're hard for me as well, but they don't seem to be too hard on you.
It flowed so well, seemed as if.. everything was just layed out on the table? I'm not quite sure.

But, it's amazing.
keep it up.
5/5

CrazyGoNuts.
I forgot it in " MySweetRose" Lol.
So, this one goes for two, mk?

You're an odd one; only slightly proud? I'd be all high and mighty if I were you. Lmfao. But, I'm not...

So, it was quite the acrostic.
They're hard for me as well, but they don't seem to be too hard on you.
It flowed so well, seemed as if.. everything was just layed out on the table? I'm not quite sure.

But, it's amazing.
keep it up.
5/5

CrazyGoNuts.
I forgot it in " MySweetRose" Lol.
So, this one goes for two, mk?

CrazyGoNuts!

It was a terrific piece of work, even though its theme was quite dispiriting and ironic and hopeless. I hardly could even pick out a favorite passage because each of them were thought-out and written rather well. On the whole, it was quite delightful to read, along with an unpromising viewpoint towards life.

Fantastic piece, nevertheless. 5/5 :]

Take care,
Marian

Waiitt. ill start out with...
CRAZYgoNUTS! <<And I finally got it right! [cheers]/

anyway. =]
this was a great acrostic. i read easily through it, and if i didnt think to hard about the format, or read that you styled it as an acrostic, i probably wouldve never guessed.

great job, its most definitely something to be proud of!

5/5.

I dont usually like this type of peotry. However, you pulled it off beautifully. 5/5

I also find acrostic poetry quite hard to write, When I do try to write it, it just doesn't seem to hold emotion of flow for me but with this piece here its quite the oposite from you. I'd be very proud of myself if I was you creating such an amazing acrostic. I have enjoyed reading your poems tonight. Keep writing so I can keep reading. ~Mel