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by Brittany C   Jul 12, 2007


Please don't give up on me.
Don't you see that I need you?
But I am afraid to give,
you my heart and soul.

Never have I given my heart,
to anyone, it is something that
must be earned with time
and through unwavering trust.

Just give me the time,
that you said you would
and let's see where,
it takes us in the end.

I'm glad that you try to understand.
That you care enough to wait for me.
My feeling for you are slowly growing,
please don't decide to try and rush them.

There is one thing I am glad for,
which is you now how to make me laugh
not many people can say the same.

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  • I like this a lot, I like how you describe your trust and love in people, how you don't just 'give your heart away', and how you portray the person who you love.

    Nice and meaningful.

    5/5 well done :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Hey Miss Fire,

    This was quite an endearing piece of work; in fact, I find it quite adorable to read. However, I supposed certain lines needs tightening up, in order to augment the rhythm, as well as adding more coherent details. It, nevertheless, is still a fine and promising work.

    Best wishes,
    Marian