Comments : Lemon Dishes (Senryu)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Lol this reminds me that I forgot to do the dishes. It's definitley original and with few lines paints a nice image. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    I like the way u have added so much meaning into it with those very precise words. Well adhered to the rule and well written. tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aw this is very unique :) good job, your choice of words is really effective

  • 16 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    This is a very cute poem... I like it a lot :-) You are very good at writing short, simple but very good poems!

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    This one was simple, yet beautiful. Excellent imagery. This poem was very unique, and very well written

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Lol... Very interesting and unique topic. This poem is original and it is very fun.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Short & Simple, I like it! And I really like how you got the idea from your Nana.. She is always handwashing dishes I guess?

    5/5 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Lol, I like it, very creative and imaginitive, great job.