Not so perfect

by My tormented little heart   Jul 13, 2007


What is it that you see in me?
I'm just an average girl
I'm far from being amazing
I'm nothing really special

I make many mistakes
And at times I'm a little crazy
So tell me this my love
Why do you call me baby?

I count my imperfections
And I hold my head real low
I don't look to the future
It's just another tomorrow

My hopes and dreams are damaged
At times I tend to cry
I get a little controlling
And I suck at saying goodbye

When I fall inlove
I tend to fall real hard
The proof is on my arm
With each and every scar

Sometimes when I get angry
I say things I don't mean
So don't you see my love
I'm not as perfect as I seem

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  • 9 years ago

    by LoneWolf

    I find that this poem fills my head with images of a broken-hearted person who feels as if they had made many mistakes.

    It is a great poem. Straight to the feels.

  • 9 years ago

    by mazzy star

    When I fall inlove
    I tend to fall real hard
    The proof is on my arm
    With each and every scar.

    Very well written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    OOo i like this poem and ur name as well..though hard to pick here i really liked these versus:

    "I count my imperfections
    And I hold my head real low
    I don't look to the future
    It's just another tomorrow

    My hopes and dreams are damaged
    At times I tend to cry
    I get a little controlling
    And I suck at saying goodbye"

    ..i also like the ending verse very strong and all in all beautifully written

    *^*crow*^*

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Nobodys perfect hu but your poem isnt far off xxxxxxxxx