How much you mean to me

by Navy SweetHeart   Jul 14, 2007


Oh how much you mean to me,
one day i will make you see.
You mean the world,
you mean my life,
you mean everything to me.

one day i will make you see what you can not see!
I will make you see what only i can see.

oh how much i love you,
one day i will show you.
i love you more than,
the earth i walk on,
the air i breathe,
the life i live
i love you more than anything.

one day i will show how much i love you!

Oh how i care for you.
one day i will show you.
i care about you more than,
my life alone,
more than anything i own.
i care about you more than anything on this earth.

One day i will make you see how much you mean to me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    The emotion and depth in this piece are wonderfully portrayed, very easily felt by the reader.

    However, your flow is very shaky due to the constant use of "I."

    Try eliminating some of the filler words (I, you, and etc) and you'll most likely find that the flow is so much smoother.

    I liked the similar repetition after each stanza, I thought that worked nicely without being completely overdone.

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