Never Give Up

by kristie   Jul 14, 2007


Never Give Up

Life may be hard
Donâ??t let that get to you
You may be bad at school
But always try your best

You may be an unwanted kid
Maybe a popular kid
It ddoesn't??t matter which you are
We are all the same

Life is like a big maze
You might take the wrong route
Maybe the right route
Remember never give Up

Take this serious though
Donâ??t take this as a warning
Live your life strong
Never give up

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  • 18 years ago

    by kristie

    Aww thanks did you read my other ones?

  • 18 years ago

    by Hatori

    Kristie,
    There was a truly powerful phrase within this poem that immediately made me want to continuously read this poem. The stanza was this one:

    Life is like a big maze
    You might take the wrong route
    Maybe the right route
    Remember never give Up

    The part about the maze showed so much truth and emotion.
    The flow was a little off, but that's OK ^_^
    You're a great poet, keep it up!
    5/5

    With all due respect,
    Hatori
    <The Dreamer>

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