Now your gone

by mia   Jul 14, 2007


Now your gone i sit at home
Only get up to use the phone
Now your gone i have set meals
You always hated "meals on wheels"
Now your gone I've lost all hope
If I'd of gone you would of coped
Now your gone i see your face
Everywhere, in every place
Now your gone i want to die
But all i ever do is cry

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hatori

    Mia,
    This is indeed a very good poem ^_^. The flow and rhyming was there, and you described your topic so well. I laughed when you included the part about "meals on wheels".
    I wouldn't change anything, so keep it up, and 5/5

    With all due respect,
    Hatori
    <The Dreamer>

  • 18 years ago

    by mia

    I personally think this is a good poem! lol!,
    if you want to use this posem for anything my full name is Mia Churms
    ty! x