Aww it was short! I wish you made it longer :) Anyway I like your choice of words, The imagery you created in this poem is really good - I can really see the pictures in my mind. Keep up the good work!

Beautiful. This poem reminded me of watching the sunrise, talking to my best friend, I remember feeling so amazing, and having so many emotions, and you did an excellent job in describing that feeling here. I loved the wording and rhyming. Amazing job

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Left you with a smile really beautiful!!

This is another great from you, so short, simple, to the point, and yet a hint of greatness in it. it rhymed well and flowed without flaw, the imagery was great and you did an excellent job in writing it.

5/5

This is a great poem! not a common topic on here i liked it. and love the choice of words