Beatfuil night

Beautiful poem

A really good poem to fade away to the emotion while kissing...
LoL! xD

Definitely a short and sweet categorized.
Well done,,,..

~TwiTcH

I should be I
what your telling me a
it should be you are not your
see grammar comes first in the poem cos it strikes the eyes

Now talking about the feelings
Its nice in the way you gave me a sight of a romantic night
i was lost seeing the moon and being with someone special

Good work
Plz dont take the poetry lightly

YOu can improve much being true as your friend

Take Care
Rohan
and i think it should be you and me together and not you and I together
hehe forgive me am not that god at english tryin to tell what i think i know
i may be wrog also

then the mood to read a poems ruins and you can imagine then the person goes into finding mistakes
lol
my psychology
lol
take in care these small things

Perhaps you won't miss if you look at him and not the stars? ^_^

Nice but I would've re-written the longer lines so that the syllables conformed with the rest - that's the hard part! Sometimes the straightforward way of saying things is easy but it doesn't necessarily work poetically.
Eg. "I wish this moment would last forever" has too many syllables, if you wrote something similar but more ambiguous like..
"Could this last forever?"
shorter, says the same bit a little less.

Are u serious this is so gay lol ;) i like it alot loser ur good cuz ur my friend lol jk keep it up i ive u a 5 ur my dawg ruff ruff lol good job