Without you

by danielle   Dec 31, 2007


Without you in my life the sky would be dark and gray
i would be all alone sitting down at the bay
with no one to hold
no one to care
no one to love
no one to share all those memories we made
when im mad i think of these and than my mood suddenly brightens and i think about how glad i am that your here to stay
that your here to care
and here to love me dear

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jay Perry Jr

    Beautiful poem keep up the good work :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    I like lots of rhyme in this beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by She Loves Me She Loves Me Not

    Love the format, and way you expressed your emotions throughout the poem. Beautifully written.

    5/5 =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Beautifully expressed write, I do say. The emotions were very clear and very expressive in such a way. Very moving and imaginative. :) Well-written, stunning piece. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jo

    Short but sweet
    i like it

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