Broken Hearts and Withering Roses...

by unblue skye   Jul 16, 2007


Broken Hearts... And Withering Roses...
Broken Hearts hopelessly wrinkling and falling to the ground...
Withering Roses crumbling in their pain...
The blood splattering onto the streets...
The petals landing in the water...
Making a pool of blood...
Sailing the hopes and dreams away with one single petal...
Our sad and broken hearts making us wail in agony...
The rose petals being drenched on our blood...
Broken Hearts...
And Withering Roses...
A story to tell...

©skye

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  • 18 years ago

    by Willow

    I really like your writting. keep it up.
    interesting read.
    5/5. love willow oxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Nice piece... though I thought you used ellipsis (...) too much, other than that it was a wonderful poem... 5/5 ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Wake

    Very expressive...great job

    keep it up

    ~Wake~

  • 18 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Cool writing i like it xxx

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