A late night cook.(Senryu)

by Crystal Gaze   Jul 16, 2007


As I lie in bed,
I hear pots and pans rattle,
And know she's cooking.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This poem Is written in my Mom's point of view. She always wakes up to me cooking late at night. What can I say I take after my Nana.:).

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    This poem is simple like the Lemon Soap one. Hehe.. silly Elaine =) I can't believe you're the one waking up your mom with the cooking and sounds of pots and pans moving. It should be the other way around.. hehe, anyways, it was another good Senryu poem though!

    5/5 ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like this poem very much. I don't like the topic and it is too simple. I can't see atmosphere of this piece, but I really liked imagery. 4/5

More Poems By Crystal Gaze