Comments : Rejection

  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney Lang

    I liked this poem a lot.

    it explains a lot of problems that girls have, specifically when dating/having relations with boys. there's always lots of pressure involved and you capture that nicely.

    also the end is a nice touch.
    happy ending, i guess. hah.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This poem is good, though it's not my favorite kind. I think what you expressed in it is very important, it's very hard to keep true to yourself when there's so much pressure.

  • 16 years ago

    by Si sI

    This is a really good poem.. and very true.. ican really relate and understand it

  • 16 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Awww this is a really good descriptive peom, i loved the way it showed all kinds of problems. io loved the ending!
    overall a good emotional write
    xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    WOW, ok, this is such a great poem

    and i completely agree

    i mean guys want the girls who where the short skirts and act like w h o r e s

    and people need to realize that lowering urself for a guy is a waste of mind body and soul

    a well deserved , 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Nice work i liked it kinda sounded like advise too but thats just me top marks :) keep it up!