While my dark lover waits.

by InterviewWithTheKat   Jul 16, 2007


While my dark lover waits.

Looking out the, darkened window,
Your hand upon my burning face.
Waiting for, I do not know,
So strong and firm was your embrace.

Your eyes were back upon me,
Your hand upon my burning face.
What you saw, I could not see.
So strong and firm was your embrace.

Your slow smile, was so very dark,
Your eyes were back upon me.
Your eyes were black, they had a spark,
What you saw, I could not see.

"He's coming, yes, I feel him."
Your slow smile was, so very dark,
My mind had just, began to swim,
Your eyes were black, they had a spark.

I knew you'd kill, and I'd implore,
"He's coming, yes, I feel him."
You will just like, you had before,
My mind had just, begun to swim.

But I'll stand by you, I love you so,
I knew you'd kill and I'd implore,
But you'd be brave, I know you will,
You will just like, you had before.
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This is a Pantoum but i cheated a bit on the last stanza!!!
Kat-x-

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow amazingly written
    keep it up!
    -Lisa

  • 16 years ago

    by thing3

    Omg u cheat!! lol only jkin u cheeky biatch! love ya rli.

    gd poem. i cant think of anything else as ive just woke up nd not in the best of moods... (dnt do mornings, or afternoons)

    keep up the kick ass work!! woot!!! =D

    xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Kat. That was amazing.
    I was looking through the poems and say you name and just had to read it. knowing I was clicking on a good read. And you didn't prove me wrong.
    Im always so impressed with your work.
    The flow is perfect. And the content in each of your poem beautiful.
    I absolutely love your peices.
    Well done,
    Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    That was a good poem