Love is an amazing thing to feel you let out total emotion in a great way you might wanna work on flow but other than that its great!!!

laura

Beautiful poem..
its really good.
keep it up/

I'm doing as you asked!

I loved your poem! It was very moving and inspiring. I hope you keep writing poems like these in the future! Good luck!

It is a wonderful poem. Keep up the good work.

I do like this one its freestyle but its meaningfull you did a good job here :) top marks

Beautiful you have so much talent well done xx

Hey beautiful poem!... it sounds really good and i love it.. but the only minor problem ( for me ) is that it sounds a bit choppy.. but ya know.. poetry souds like that sometimes.. i write like that too.. so no biggie, cuz the poem is awesome!! :)

Very cute.

Awww
cute poem!
i love it.
ppl can relate to it
rating it a 5 !

I loved the idea. It's very unigue, and meaningfull as well.It shows how sweet love can be- as you fell in love, your life was filled with happiness. Very cute!
My fav part was:
I have fallen into a deep abyss
Which now i can not escape
An abyss of happiness
I am glad to be here

Great job. 5/5 Keep it up

Take care

I really Love this Poem... I can relate to it!

Any one who has been down then stumbled upon love will relate to this. nice and light and easy to read