Whoa.... this is amazing, this takes some real talent and you nailed it... wow this is probably one of the best poems i have ever seen. great job!!

thx for the comment and when you read it did you notice if the 9th line had 10 or 9 im having problems figuring that out:S:S

keenan

This was beautiful, Bryan. This style seems very complex. I know I wouldn't be able to pull this style off and you did which shows how much talent you truely have. A good song choice to write about. I think you did an amazing job writing such a creative piece. Well done~mel

You aren't allowed to post stuff not yours. Even though part of this poem is. Try creating a completely original piece....I liked this, but I'm just advising you cause people might object

Most excellent poem amazing I loved it

Wow Bryan
This is a stunning piece. I have never read anything like this before. Beautiful and yet so sad. Brings tears to the eye.
Excellent write.
Take Care Cindy

I demand that you go to Yahoo! Search and type in 'glosa verse poem'. For me this poem was the second in the search. I just thought you'd like to know something that cool. =]

btw, i like this poem.

LoveloveLOVE it. Of course, you already knew that I adored this piece, from very first read I was hooked...I guess I just never got around to commenting it. Every single line holds such heart wrenching sorrow, you can feel the pain from your words as you read through the poem. You wrote it so well and everything just flowed together perfectly, great job Darling !

5.5
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