The Way I Feel (not finished)

by Kalee   Jul 17, 2007


I try not to look at you
Every day
But I can't help it
I can't stop the way I feel

I see you coming
And I wish I was beside you
Walking with you
Not past

At night I lie awake
And think what it would be like
If you and I were together
And not apart

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bug1219

    Its goin good and i cant wait to read the complete thing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Awww i like the beginning of the poem, it is simple and sweet, but has a very indeph emotional side to it. I cant wait to s the ending. personal message me when it is done, so i can read it all? Continue to write, this poem was really good!
    best wishes
    kirsty
    xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Han84

    Cool poem hun...
    well if u feel like tht even more bout him then go see him n tell him hun...
    xhx

  • 16 years ago

    by Xx trying to be strong but only just holding onxX

    Hey hey kalee... amelia here wellno dar that its me but yer... ur poem is great u always no wat to write in these poems... you are great at everything that you do and ur really good at writing poems keep up the great work

    -Amelia

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