Dream of Me (Acrosstic)

by Crystal Gaze   Jul 17, 2007


Dream of me my sweet.
Remember old memories.
Entrap yourself within our laughs
And put aside your present tasks, just
Mend the bridge of our past.

Occur once and awhile, and save my
Frail heart, for this soul never wanted to part.

Mend me, and mend our bridge,
Entrap yourself within our dreams, for I will surly be dreaming of us.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Very well written, with great imagery and awesome flow
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Another great poem, Elaine. I honestly don't see how you do it! Whenever I read this.. It reminded me of one of my ex's for some odd reason. I guess it was the whole bridge mending thing you had in here.. I was always wishing back then that he'd mend the bridge between us after what happened.

    Anyways.. beautiful poem Elaine, another 5/5 =)

    ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Short but sweet and cute

    i usually dont like acrostics but you did a brilliant job on this one
    i give you 5/5 for truely putting your feeling in an acrostic(i know its hard to)

  • 16 years ago

    by Marina

    5/5!! this is really good!!! such care!! don't stop writeing!
    -Marina

  • 16 years ago

    by Leah20

    This is deffinently one of the better acrostic poems I've come across recently. Great job!

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