Oh, very nice. The flow in this piece was excellent.

Very nicely penned.

What a beautifuly penned poem. out of th other two that i have also read of your this one is by far the best for me, i think it was because your rhyming scheme was easier to comprehend, and thereflow it gave your flow much more rhythem. I also love the way that you portrayed life, and how you gave inspiration through your words. Your opening stanza was perfect, and really captures the reader to continue to the second stana! really well written with a flawless flow, like your others; a 5/5 from me
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Very beautifully written...i really like this poem..im not sure why but i just loved it... i dont have anything bad to say about it... it was absolutely amazing! 5/5

The flow was smooth&effortless.Very easy to understand.Great work.5/5

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All your poems are so beautifully penned and again you have acomplished such a diamond of a piece. I can't resist ading you too my favorites after reading just a few of your pieces. The emotions captured within this were great. Definitly strong, powerful and heartfelt. Not much more I can say about this gorgeous poem. Keep up the great work.~mel