The Touch of A Goddess

by Mousie   Jul 18, 2007


The silk of her skin
Glimmering in the darkness.

Beads of passion
Surface from deep within her soul.

Lips of enticement
Linger on his flesh.

Sea of blissful ecstasy
Crashing on the sandy shores.

Heart of unending keep
Released from it's tenacious boundaries.

Excitement of eternal love
This is the touch of a goddess.

i finally got a little bit of inspiration, i wrote this from more of a guy's perspective, let me know what you think.

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  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Your poems are just so short but they get the meaning across...I really enjoy reading them...

    Good Job....5/5...

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "Glimmering in the darkness"

    I love the contrast of that line..you have true talent to write from the other gender's (let alone another person's) perspective..amazing style to this one, good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I think it was a great poem. I like your choice of words, Flow was smooth.

    Sea of blissful ecstasy
    Crashing on the sandy shores.
    ^^ I love those two lines.

    Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Again, i thought this was a very good poem. I thought some of your other poems were better. But this one is still good.]

    It flowed well, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This poem is good but i dont think its your best... but thats just my opinion...but it was still good.
    4/5

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