Puberty

by Birgit   Jul 18, 2007


Bla, not my best.. it's just that a friend told me to write a poem, cause I was feeling a little down.. but then I felt good again.. and it just made me think..

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It's something they call puberty,
When you're feelings get thrown around,
And every little whisper,
Could seem like a screaming sound.

Sometimes you'll have the most fun in the world,
Can't stop laughing and enjoying.
Living life, realising it could be your last day,
Hoping all the feelings you have at the moment, will just stay.

And sometimes you'll have the worst feeling ever,
Feel like you're going to cry forever.
Hoping your life will end as soon a possible,
Living with all those feelings you have; it's just impossible.

Well, sooner or later I'll find out,
It was just a period,
With certainty... with doubt.
I'll find out that life is precious, life is good.
Just enjoy, 'cause we should.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Now, this poem is a kind of special. I liked the comparison of the menstrual period to a transient period of time in your life. Therefore, whether one is in a good or bad mood, live life to the fullest... thanks for sharing a gem with us. I truly like it a lot. :) Take care, darling.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Really like this poem.
    Very well discription of puberty.
    Know the feelings, lol.
    Great piece of writing.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    Lol this poem is so original.. and brave!!
    and its soo true lol.. it was written realy well, but at times i wasnt quite sure if it was supposed to rhyme or not..
    but the poem was quite clever and cute :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    Aww this is a cute poem it makes me want to give it to my lil cousin whos growin up and confussed...lol this poem had great flow and it makes me want to go read another one of your poems....but keep writting and dont put that pen down anytime soon!

  • 16 years ago

    by out of the shadows and into the light

    Great 5/5 it kept me wanting more

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