Wow.. This poem was incredibly deep, it just hit me.. Loved it.

Wow.. this was very emotional.. and your word choice was amazing, it really uplifted the poem from an average to a way beyond average. it was a sad poem but you penned it beautifully. and again although short, it really spoke to me, a very indepth poem.
I really liked this poem because the words you chose to use spoke to me in a different level, and they made you hang on to everything that was said. Also because there was a great message behind it.
deffinatly a 5/5

Well, Teria.
-=Smiles.=-
Pleasure to see you again. Lol.
Well type to you.
Powerful words in a short piece of writing.
Amazing job, hun.
Take care.

-Heather

Great poem. Very powerful. I loved it. 5/5

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Teria, So far this is the best poem I have read by you. The emotions I must say were beautifully deep and really touched home for me at this very minute. Each word created a hit to my heart so to say. I loved the flow hun, the word choice touching. Amazed by this poem I truely am. Loved it. 5/5. Well done ~mel