My Heart; World of Nothingness.

by DeathlyAmore   Jul 18, 2007


Oh oh oh...

He who hears; Listen...

Lost in the nothingness
Not the only one lost; From the nothingness

Nothing to loose; In this world of nothingness
No way to heal; In this world of nothingness

Nothing to feel; In this world of nothingness
Nothing is real; In this world of nothingness

Falling to the ground,
The face kisses earth.
Confused and nothing to find;
Lost with a world made in my mind.

What is this, What am I?

Haunted by constant; Depression.
Judged bitterly everyday.
Filled with all this negativity.
Caused by things 'They' say about me.

Lost in the nothingness
Not the only one lost; From the nothingness

Nothing to loose; In this world of nothingness
No way to heal; In this world of nothingness

Nothing to feel; In this world of nothingness
Nothing is real; In this world of nothingness

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Poems requires interpretation. Lot's of it.

Main Plot, Thesis:
"The nothingness is my heart"

Background Idea:
"Lost in my desolate 'Heart'"
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To your consideration,
Samuel.

"I shall always and forever be..."
[Deathly'Amore]

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  • 18 years ago

    by sara

    Great poem keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Skulblaka Sverda

    This poem is sooo sad, It felt like you are drained, emptied, negativity pulling you down.
    I want to give words of encouragment, but I have been and also am in that "whirlpool".
    How does one give advise when one is in it also?
    Just keep fighting the good fight, believe me I know it gets tiring, like fighting a never ending battle.
    So much more I want to say, in such a small place and yet what more can I say, because nothing changes and I am not in your "shoes".
    Just to let you know I care and am here, and I know I don't know you at all, and may not know the right things to say or put it into words, but your poems say a lot about you and it's all great! :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Sam,

    I love when you write dark poetry... it's just amazing && this is no different.

    "Falling to the ground,
    The face kisses earth."
    ^ I love that 2nd line. Very creative. Gah! Wonderful.

    "Haunted by constant; Depression.
    Judged bitterly everyday.
    Filled with all this negativity.
    Caused by things 'They' say about me."
    ^ I can relate to that stanza so much.. :/ I'm judged every day because of my mistakes.

    The flow was flawless, the vocab was amazing, && overall, I loved it. [Just like Iloveyou!!] Lol.

    Fantastic write. :] 5.5
    - Steph <3

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