Awww you are right it is rather long.. but i read all of it without getting distrackted.. because it really drew me in.. was a wonderfull write, deep and meaningfull with a great choice of words.
'Alone and Tired
I sat and awaited his arrival
The wait seemed infinite
I would die if I waiting on him for my survival'

^^ my fav stanza.. but in the last line.. prehaps ' if I waiting on ' should be 'if IM waiting on'.. reads better .. maybe it was a typing error.. but i loved it .. def a 5/5
xxx

Indeed a sweet addiction This is a very inspirational poem of the truest kind

I really enjoyed reading this poem, I read it as a poem but I think it would be a good song if you could get it to work. Being alone is hard but you'll be a much stronger person with time. Excellent write and great imagery and flow 5/5 GG23

Again i give you a 5, and sorry again. i am an athiest, and i don't like reading about religion it is something i feel nothing for. please don't hold it against me

Another wonderful piece. I am glad that you are not afraid to tell your story. I hope it will inspire other poets!!! 5/5 love

5/5!!!!!!Amazing and deep poem!

This is really a cute poem. I loved the message and the way you have structured the poem. Really wonderful and catching. Just correct the simple bloomer in the line

Feeling helpless, wanting die.

It must be either

Feeling helpless, wanting death or Feeling helpless, wanting to die.

Nevertheless 5/5 all the way :)

Tc
Fsams

So Very Very Verrry True!
Thanks for Sharing!
5/5