Sad but yet beautiful Jenni, another wonderful write, I liked the way you worded this beautifully written

"Thought that we would last forever
What a fool I must have seemed
Trying to move on, away from you
But every night you haunt my dreams"

What a heartbreaking poem.. your talent is still there my sweet. Looks like i have a lot of reading to do! lol
5/5
*Gem*

A little unsteady on the rhythm but not too bad! I like it though, a lot. Nicely worded and you are good on free verse. Kepp up the good work. 5/5

Very strong emotional piece. the last two stanzas were great with word and rhyming. the flow was good, i loved it! 5/5

Wow, i can feel the emotion. very well writtin. i liked it vey much.. i rated this a 5. keep up the good work

This is a very strong and emotional poem.. it was sad yet beautifully written, i loved the words that you used, it created a great atmoshpere that suited your poem. the flow was good, and i loved the ending! brilliant write!
i rated you a 5/5
well earned!

xxx

Colorful words and a strong meaning

no corrections leave it just the way it is
5/5

I thought this a very good poem
its real feelings not

some that someone just thinks it
feels like

but i loved the ending it was great

and i thought that the rhyming was great

5/5

"Tears roll freely from " << I think that would sound better as " Tears rolling freely from.."
Just my thoughts.

Okay, the very first stanza was amazing, after that it was kind of dull, with little flow. The last stanza, though.. Oh my gosh, dear. It was utterly amazing. Like, words can't express how much I liked it. But, the other four stanzas, were a bit.. gah. I think it's due to the lack of punctuation, but I know that can't be all. I'm one for punctuation, though.. it always helps me when I read.

But, overall you did a great job. The emotion was quite great through out it, and the meaning was as well.

I'll give you a 5/5

Wow..it was great..reading it...
i dont have words..that describe how i feel..

Beautiful free verse... emotions penned you portrait here, for the lover to the lover....but unloved, "Harsh words break no bones but they do break hearts." yet so hopeful... "Happy memories never wear out.... relive them as often as you want." Have a good day, keep them coming, take care.

Wow an amazing peice of poetry! your a really gr8 writer!!!

Rach

I love it.. because all of us go through this kind of feelings for another person.. its full of emotion and i give it a 5/5!.. awesomely writtin and keep them comming!..

This is a very good poe... I really liked it and i can relate to it... good job

I really like diz itz really touching

Love this poem keep up the good work

It seems such a short journey between that fluttering-heart in the beginnings to the tumbling heart wrenching end doesn't it? Very sad poem.

Well written.

Mo
xx

I love your style of writing its very unique keep up the good work!
<3 emma

WOW! i love this poem. so heartfelt..
and i can totally relate.
you made me feel your pain as i was reading this..and that's what a great poem does.
good choice of words..they really help portray your emotions throughout the poem.
i really did love this. it's sorrowful yet beautifully written. great work! =]
--Viola