It was a good poem. loved the way you used the words to create such a strong picture in my mind. 5/5

I love the complete turn around of this poem.
I liked this stanza: What if I told you that in all of my mess?
That Jesus came in,
And my case he contest
How he said that I wouldn't die
Until his will for me came through as it was prophesied
5/5

Wow.
this is an emotional poem.
it reminds me alot of myself.
not so much about jesus etc. but the situation and the feelings in there.

What if told you that I tried to kill myself?
And that I put 10,000mg of pills to my head
How I lay helpless on the Hospital bed
Thinking that I was going to hell

this made me really want to read on.
i loved it.
and this stanza

What if I was to tell you that it's only because of his saving grace?
That I am alive, instead of in that terrible place
Where the devil is in total control
And eternal torment is his only goal

made me realise that the life i used to lead is no longer an option and that i cannot go back to that because i am so much better off as i am now.

i loved this poem. 5/5
much love .xx

Loved how emotional it was.keep up the good works

Wow, beside all the beauty of this poem, i must say i would give this poem 100 rather than a 5 cause today i was talking to a person and it seem like what ever i felt and wanted to express are all packed up in this poem, so it just realived all of my pain..

GREAT JOB

Yes this is a wonderful piece. I loved the wordings and it really encouraged me to move on. Great flow of emotions and the message is crystal clear. 5/5 all the way

Tc
Fsams

I really did find this piece to be interesting. A strong piece which had a great meaning and story portrayed behind it. Although I found the flow to be a little off in some places it was still a great piece. You expressed things very well. A good effort. ~mel

Beautiful express penned yet good message to the reader.... so inspirations written, "Your worst days are never so bad that you are beyond the reach of God's grace and your best days are never so good that you are beyond the need of God's grace."

Have a great weekend, best wishes.

Very powerful message. You may want to recheck your poem for certain grammar errors.

I am sorry it took so long to read this i went to a prayer meeting tonight that was moving but this poem has surpasses the testemony I recieved there I am not only And Rejoicing with you
because Jesus has come into your life i have added this poem to my favorites list because the Lord has given you the gift of inspiration that you do not mind sharing ..God bles you

It is late here and I submitted the comment before proof reading
I am sorry it took so long to read this. I went to a prayer meeting tonight that was moving but this poem has surpassed the testimony I received there I am not only Rejoicing with you
because Jesus has come into your life i have added this poem to my favorites list because the Lord has given you the gift of inspiration that you do not mind sharing. God bless you

Beautifully Written!
5/5

I think that this is a wonderful touching testimony that should be shared with anyone that will listen. This poem held me captivated from the beginning to the end. It really touched my heart. I had no problems at all following each stanza. You painted a picture with each and every word. I wish you the best of luck in your new found life, and I am very happy that you lived.

Letty

I normally dont like religious poems or anything to do with god but i love this poem. Its so real and i can relate to it.
Keep up the good work.

Great poem i have nothing to say for you have a good time in writting like a rime

The story is very cliche and I felt while I was reading it that I'd read it many times before. There are few spelling mistakes and a couple lines that you rhymed where the words don't even rhyme together. Rather then tell you where they are I'll let you actually read over your work like you should have before you posted this. Good attempt though 4/5