I have no idea

by justin   Jul 20, 2007


Family itz a good word
thatz suppose 2 come wit great love ones
well wat do u do wen the ones u was suppose 2 be
loved turns around and treatenedsu life
wit no compasion well im done wit all of my family life gets harder and harder every day especially livin wit
this family wen will the life i dream of livin come along cause this is not the way i dreamt of livin my life
but i guess sumtimes u gotta take life the way it comes
until u can make different i'll wait 4 these life changes 2 occure.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    Im ready for a change. maybe in life and everything else. great poetry. over all score....10/10

    mandy xx

  • 16 years ago

    by LiNa

    Hey my buddy andrews on here well i liked it because the way i see it family sucks but thaqts my opinion and well friends have always been there for me so i see what u mean but i liked it otherwise .

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Gunna feel like the old fart here but take it while you can, its rough out there...of course everyone's family is different, and if it seems as if its getting to a point where it will..cause you to hate one another, then maybe its time to move on with your life to prevent that from happening

    ...great work on the poem btw! haha

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Me 2 i'm waiting 4 changes..... but i'm sure life will get easier....

  • 16 years ago

    by audrey harris

    That's good writing, and well it makes me sad, i'm glad you say that you're waiting for changes :) u got my vote

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