Gone - Really gone

by Lauren   Jul 20, 2007


This strange feeling
The lump in my throat

The gentle musician's
hitting every note

The look of sadness
in your mothers eyes

Nothing will bring you back
not even her crys

Your father standing there
in a daze

He thought your bad attitude
was just a teenage faze

But now your gone
you really gone

And will only be remembered by the beat of the sad funeral song

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    This is so unbelievably sad :(

    you are a really good poet

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    *tear*
    FANTASTIC
    this is by far my favorite one
    loved it loved it loved it
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    Wow that is really really sad. the rhyming scheme was very different but really good, it kind of made it more poignant because it was so simple and straigt to the point - which of course was sad. all in all a great poem.

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