Broken love*
by xoxcalichickxox Jul 21, 2007
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There was this guy & this girl and they were in love, it seemed their love was sent from above. Nothing on earth could tear them apart, they promised theyd never break one anothers heart. Then all of a sudden something had changed, it seemed their feelings had been rearranged. No more i loves you's or x's and o's, no more flowers or ribbons and bows. No more goodnites, sweetdreams and a late nite kiss, those little things are the most that will be missed...this is the end goodbye for now, the question that replays is why and how? |
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16 years ago
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
Love it!!!!
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16 years ago
by Birgit
I like, I like =]!! And the last line, is really powerfull. "this is the end goodbye for now, the question that replays is why and how?"
One thing, maybe you should try to do it in stanza's.. instead of 1 "story" =] Well.. if you don't want to, don't, cause it's good the way it is too ^^
If you have the time, could you read and comment one of my poems too ^_^
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