My pleasure to read read...what a poems you penned her Cindy dear. the lonely of heart breaking! Beautiful emotion write... so breathtaking!

Very nice Cindy.....slightly different feel in the structure and flow.....

Hope a distant memory,
now forever gone.
Quietly echoing,
A lost lover's song.

^ great ending......Love, Debbie

So moving

Good use of ryhming. soft words. that makes a unique flow . and helps reader to read in a flowying pattern. nice work

5/5

Tis by far one of your best, i absolutely love the choice in wording, and the flow was superb, tis a flawless 5/5!!! again great poem, i want to read more!!!

Sometimes I sit and think how you are able to do this Cindy....write love poems all the time and each one is uniuqe in its own way and each one is so beautifully flowing....I just loved this and the last line just captured it all for me!!
With Love
Chelsey

Wow, very beautiful and touching.

WOW u did a real great job,it really is breath taking and touching. I love it....

This poem is deep. It should be turned into a song...it just has this rhythm to it (hard to explain) Great job =)

Hey Cindy,
This is really superb. Right from the starting its awesome. The first line itself hits where it hurts the most. Lovely write. You are amazing and matchless.

Keep writing

all the best and take care

One word.....AMAZING!!! well mayeb alot more
but it was soog ood..if only had the talent of you ahah...but then again im just learngin how to write them:D...
if u would plz commetn on some and rate some of my poems...am looking to improve myself!....

ty take care
bree

This piece could almost pass for a dark lost love poem, i love how your made such a dark place a lost love poem and did it so well as to speak of him like he is still here and he is in your heart which keeps him alive, great poem cindy xox sam

Hope a distant memory,
now forever gone.
Quietly echoing,
A lost lover's song.

What a perfect ending , whole thing comes out with deep emotions.Again a classic work.
Keep writing .

Take care
chavii.

Heart's desire hurting,
joy of love turns to pain.
Burning the essence of being.
Nothing left in life to gain.

^That stanza hits me with a concrete block! :(

But the poem is really gorgeous. I'm at a loss for words, for it was too remarkable for words. Honest.
A lovely, emotive write.
Thanks for sharing!

Love,
Debbie

Very sad and beautifully penned. I love your word choice in this one and the flow is good. Excellent job!!

Keep up the good work i love this poem

Very beautiful write Cindy

The closure was the best part of the poem

Omg! that was an awesome poem!!! gret job! kepp up the good work cindy!

$erena

Nice nice..well keep it up