Contest poem that rocked 5/5

SEE thats what i am talkin about this is a great pen....i see how you made the reader think that this is about a rainbow but also about something else! great job keep it up...

Soo true i liked the stanza
Sky was so plain back then
With the sun after the rain
It happened to be normal for her
Until it came and break the sky from being plain

It was very good! You have a very nice pen going on. Nice hun.

Wow. i loved the wording in this, the vocab was bigger and better. it was a great piece and the way you described it was awesome. 5/5

Now, To me this wasn't as good as the lyrics I read, But it was still an enjoyable read. Overall I liked the meaning you portrayed but this piece just didn't hit my heart for some reason. I have no idea why but I just couldn't feel alot of emotion coming from it. Still worth 5/5 from me though so well done.~mel

Beautiful! REally blew me away. I loved how you portryed that guy as a rainbow. And ending was simply perfect!
Idea was amazing and really interesting.Could do a bit more emotion.
Overall, loved it! :) 5/5

Ahh yes, another one of those poems. I liked it very much and I kind of got confused with the first two lines, maybe you should fix that. But anyway, it was great. Well done.

It lacked a bit of flow i found it hard to keep concentrated some of you lines need repairing in this one mainly the bottom ones that will make the flow sound better 4/5

I love the wording in this but I feel you tried to hard to rhyme at times. this poem was still a good poem 4/5

She could still recall
The moment it suddenly came
How it made a difference
To a world that seems to be the same

my favorite stanza I dont know why I just like it keep writing