Confusions (Collab)

by Birgit   Jul 22, 2007


This is a Collab I wrote with my friend ZimaUltifera. =] I helped him write this, 'cause he was confused about his feelings. =) I think it turned out pretty nice. Let us know what you think! And I really recommend you to read ZimaUltifera's poems too! =D

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What happens when you start to like two girls,
when everything in your head twirls.
You like the things one of them would do..
but the other one has your heart too...

The confusions start,
Two girls, are taking your heart,
What to do, who to take,
But in the end, my heart will always break.

I just want somebody to hold,
But once I wish for that,
All these confusions unfold,
And I'm here, alone, in the cold.

All those feelings to take,
Which will make it,
And which will break?
Confusions,

Now I'm thinking of who to chose,
Knowing, this is not how its supposed to be,
All these feelings,
I should love one, not two or three!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Nicely done collab. The substance hits home and captures my heart: it is something I can connect with. Yeah. I'm like one of the girls. But alas, he chose the other girl instead of me. What a drama. Still can't forget him though (you know him). Anyway, sorry for the ramble. Both of you did well. It's a lovely collab. Thanks for sharing!

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    I dont like the last line....(i think)....

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great work you both.
    A good poem. Once I had that problem too.
    It's a very good discription.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    I think we all have a little of this at one time eh??
    i have this problem right now actually.. and that describes it really really well!!
    good job guys :)
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    You two are very talented this is a beautiful poem...and i mean that honestly...i love the way it was different from just a regular poem i would normally read...this makes me want to do a collad...lol great flow..5/5

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