Everything

by loviin hym   Jul 22, 2007


Every new beginning,
comes from some beginnings end.

Every time you kill me,
I am born again.

Every time you close that door,
Another door is opened.

And every time you say goodbye,
a different word is spoken.

Every time you look at me
my back is facing you,

And every time you ask to see me
I'll have something else to do.

Every time I join your game,
You're not playing fair,

And every time I really love you,
I pretend that I don't care.

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  • 17 years ago

    by noha

    Realy nice keep ur work up

  • 18 years ago

    by jESSiCA

    Thanks for tha comment on my poem.
    i likee this one its gewd && real
    alrtie ma take kare

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I liked this, it flows quite nicely. Usually I don't like rhyme but in this case I thought it added to the write well. The ending fit really nicely. My suggestion would be to change 'you're' in the 2nd to last stanza to 'you are' just so that the syllable count is equal. Nice stuff anyway :)

    - ariana

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor

    Wow, i love your wording, and the rythem of this poem.
    its short and very emotional, and relatable.
    i like you style of writing, and i think its similar to mine.
    deff. 5/5 fomr me, keep writing <3

  • 18 years ago

    by j a z z y

    Thisz isz a really good poem
    i can relate alot
    && i like ur style in writing

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