I wont miss you

by Chelsey   Jul 22, 2007


As I listened to the words you were telling me
I couldnt believe what i was hearing
Why couldnt you just see
That the things you said caused a searing pain
I was telling you the truth all along.
You were what kept me sain.
But now All i have to do is be strong.
But its harder than it may look
You've had a big impact on my life
Nothing for us went by the book
you just caused so much strife
But i loved you anyways
We had so much fun
I loved to do things with you anyday
But the fun days are over hun
It was a fun trip
there is no more me and you
You let the friendship slip
But dont worry, I wont miss you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Sain=sane

    i=I

    I thought the emotions in this piece were beautifully expressed, I found it to be very bittersweet.

    I thought the flow was good throughout the piece and I loved the ending line, it held so much power and depth.

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Wow u did a real good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Very strong ending! This was really good. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    This poem really scared me lol
    it made me thought about me and my best friend but we still best friends thanks to God

    good job and keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Jayleen

    Wow, this is a really nice poem. I went through the same thing.

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