Is this the magic of love?

by ECILA ice   Jul 23, 2007


It feels so high
It makes me feel so addictive
Can't help not to crave for more
Is this what love really is?

One smile can make a difference
One "I love you" completes me
So inexplicable
Is this what love can do?

I donâ??t wanna lose this feeling
Donâ??t wanna miss even a single thing
Especially, not you
Am I really falling for you?

So mystical
Don't know, can't understand
Not so sure with this feeling
Is this the magic of love?

** just a simple poem that i want to dedicate to someone so dear to me...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    Good poem needs a little work I have read better from you the flow is no stedy and the rhythm was a little off however the emothion came throught very well.

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    I liked your wording... I agree^ u can do better though... It wasnt a steady rhythm to me. Hard to tell if there was a rhyme scheme too.

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    This is a good poem but i feel you can do better...you have talent and i can see that but you just seem to be stuggling wit putting the words on the paper in this one...i do however like the emotion in this poem i think you just need to work with the flow and ryhming...keep it up..DOnt be mad...

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